A romantic love story about a female werewolf (Amethyst)on the run from a murder. A handsome young alpha male(Rain Walker) who falls for Amethyst Richardson and he does everything in his power to protect her; while trying to keep his inner wolf under control from possessing and desiring her.
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1 . I enjoyed it.
Posted January 28, 2012 by RedCyn , AlexandriaLight hearted quick read and action packed.
2 . Too bad to Finish.
Posted August 01, 2011 by Sam , Orange CountyI don't want to be mean, but this story confused me more than it did hook me. There are so many grammatical errors, I was getting frustrated. It was almost like this was the first draft instead of an editted final draft. The story idea and outline are good, but it needs to be reviewed, spell checked, grammatically checked, and rewritten. My advice to the author would be to take it off the site, review and rewrite, then re-issue the novel. Sure, it's a free ebook so I can't conplain too much right. However, based on this book, I would not purchase any books from this author because of the careless way it was written. These authors are supposed to be professionals in their field, and this was not a proffessionally written novel. It has a good start, but needs revision.
3 . Needs Editing
Posted June 03, 2011 by Katherine , DearbornStoryline and plot are good. However, this book needs some serious editing. Many incomplete sentences, run-on sentences, and incorrect usage of quotation marks. It made reading this book frustrating and took away from how good this story could actually be. Serious editing is needed and maybe a few more drafts.
4 . Need a serious review
Posted April 12, 2011 by Vanessa , MontrealFirst, the idea for the story is great, I just think it needs to be push a little bit farther.
I found a lot of mistakes, some words weren't written correctly and some sentences weren't clear.
As for the history, I think some parts could have been a little bit more developed. Things were happening too fast, the reader doesn't have time to wonder what will happen next.
Still, I think the author as a great potential, she just needs to refine it a little.
So, all in all, this is why I give it a two stars. (by the way, sorry if I made mistakes on my own, I'm french so my English isn't perfect)
November 12, 2010
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